Strike

This was actually just an experiment. I typically do not rhyme and I am usually prone to writing extremely long pieces.

Three by three we lined up,
Which was nine times the fine show that showed up, noses up.

Our pride bolstered, we knew we could never be wrong,
Until our long con fell, and the bell tolled, we were gone before dawn.

Author's Note

This was actually just an experiment. I typically do not rhyme and I am usually prone to writing extremely long pieces. This is my first completed piece in this fashion. Enjoy!

Reviews

[Katie Flores]

So I enjoyed your rhyming parts, the longer sentences instead of the four word quips (that I usually do(: ) was refreshing. the image I get is like a kids talent show? or a talent show that they thought they had down, but actually knew nothing about.... well it was short and sweet. nice :)