Self Centered

I find myself enclosed in nothing but darkness.

A figure of a female appears, she's amongst the largest.

Hate fills my blood and sorrow fills my heart.

Because I remember the last morning of a feeling that onced sparked.

 

I am self centered and bound to forever walk alone.

No where to go, no place to call home.

I am alone in this ocean of dispair.

And I am gasping for that last breath of air.

 

I am unlucky because I'm alone.

No place to go, no place to call home.

When the wind wind blows I have no choice but to follow.

I'm in the darkness and I have been swallowed.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The internal struggle is powerful. All of us struggle with good and bad thoughts. Sometime darkness is a safe place. Time to regain strength and attempt to tried again. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[KeelyJane]

This just needs a melody. :) Nice.

[R.F Gooding]

Funny you say this. I was planning on making it a song I just haven't found the right artist.

[R.F Gooding]

I put my heart into this. Tell me what you guys think.