Love me or Hate me

Love me or Hate me

A Poem by Grace
"

I got this idea from my friends ex boyfriend he loved her then hated her they just ended up hating each other

"

One day you love me

the next you hate me

your one of those people

that say they mean it......

.....you don't

you tryed

you were not good

thats what you get.

Now I wait

by the phone

I'll wait for you to call.

But why wast my time!

you love me

today

you hate by

tomorrow

I loved you

today

I'll love you

tomorrow

you go with her

I go with me friends

and you leave me

alone.

© 2008 Grace


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Definitely well-written, save for a few spelling mistakes (tried* and my*, but hey, that's what editors are for). Very good, I enjoyed it. Good luck! ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I can so relate to this poem and the mixed feelings, I just recently went through an effed up realationship just like this, I like it. You def put it in words

Posted 16 Years Ago


Yea that is how it is sometimes, and I think that my relationship is similar to that sometimes. On the other hand I know that we love one another, but this poem just reminded me of how my relationship to my boyfriend can be sometimes. Good Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Grace
Grace

Fostoria, OH



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I'm Grace I've been writting from 2005 to today at school I get most of it written down my friends think it's cool I tryed to et some people to join but they said no.Music is also a way I can bend thi.. more..

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