Shadows

shadows dance across the room, hundreds & thousands, humming a demented tune.
They dance around, & they laugh & giggle
oh so demented, oh so little.

Reviews

[Rahul]

lol, this time i really had made some views of your this piece, i can relate how you can dance with giggling..lol :), but hey, wanna you dance with me ?, neah, i think no...because i don't wanna hurt my foots by your long heels...lol :) *kidding*
anyway, that's again a great write, i loved this piece and i loved your concept of writiing but hey, can you add few more lines ?
if yeah, than go and add few more lines and let me know i'd like to read more...so, i think you love to dance along with your shadow..isn't it... ?
hope you'd love to dace along with me...too and not to worry, i won't then gonna be kissing you...lol :)100/100

[Loveless]

lol, thank you! and sure i'll try my best to add more lines but im not sure it'll be very goodXD

[Rahul]

why do you think you ain't good ?
you're good, ok...ok...if you don't get what to write..then just sit on your bed and just think about me..surely you'd get some words to write....:)

[Loveless]

Well, it's finished here: www.writerscafe.org/writing/ferrel01/1188908/
im sorry i have writersblock!

[Rahul]

Ahhahah...nice;y penned i loved that one...that's really very nice thanks for extending that one...i hope you did it for me....::) eh//lol

[Loveless]

lol, no problem!

[Rahul]

Hey ! :P
How are you ?

[Loveless]

I'm good^^
How are you??:)