Heavier Than Air

thoughts on a flight to somewhere

and we continued
climbing the heights, but the sky
unreached like heaven

between clouds, we hung
the atlas spread out beneath
what wonder, this plane

so heavy, yet light
i'm heavy too, but we fly
together, like birds

Reviews

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Beautiful! Excellent job!!

[Emily B]

i would fly, maybe i would fall and crash, but still i would fly

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. oh ... my heart skipped a beat ... and i am nearly in tears ... my wings are broken ... but once upon a time i did fly with someone ... thank you for reminding me ... how beautiful that was ... with this absolutely stunning piece of work ...