Echoes of Time

Echoes of Time

A Poem by ferousfinite
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when you step away

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Echoes of Time
That day you decided to walk
looking back when we talked
That look in your eyes
as if you were going to cry
Stepping away with courage
and avoiding a beautiful marriage
That smirk you had on your face
like you were out of place
Now I know! I know how you felt
and with all those feelings that you dealt
As I see into the past
now and then and quick and fast
I still hear your voice in my mind
like echoes of time.

© 2014 ferousfinite


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wow that was beautiful. it actually made me remember of the past.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When you are finally over a person you get this epiphany about realizations of reality that seem to only make sense from an outsider point-of-view. Old feelings become logic and actions are reviewed without effort. What was your last break-up like? >>> type it in... let's hear it!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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