Until My Sorrow Fade

The love that remain
In my heart is pain
Until my sorrow fade
My days dark I am afraid
There I was with love in my heart
Then it was ripped and torn apart
My days dark I am afraid
Until my sorrow fade
My heart is in pain
The love that remain

It is like a thorny bush with spite
With once beauty and life
Colorful flowers, so fresh and bright
Love can bring life
Be selfish and safe and sound
Remember I'm just the investment
I am destiny bound
I offer my self as an embellishment
On my knee with my life on a ring 
I was never your king!

With this fruit I can only bear
What with my self can I care
I won't eat your poison or truth
I confused you with honor and couth
The lesson is learned
Love in my body has burned
My heart is in pain
The love that remain
With once beauty and life
It is the root of my strife

The love that remain
In my heart is pain
Until my sorrow fade
My days dark I am afraid
There I was with love in my heart
Then it was ripped and torn apart
My days dark I am afraid
Until my sorrow fade
My heart is in pain
The love that remain

Author's Note

Reviews

[dw817]

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True love doesn't ask us to be Kings or Queens, only to recognize a perfect Matriarchal Monarch Society. :)

At least until you understand your place in the world. No-one will further tell you where to go and what to do than the one who truly loves you.

While that may not make too much sense now it is a distinct fact of life - leaving you in charge of accepting this relationship or not. However, if =YOU= take the reigns that leaves HER in control of deciding to accept this relationship or not.

Whichever you choose in life, you will need to decide which you will be, the reigns or the rabbit.

[ferousfinite]

This piece is about accepting the inevitable fact of fate. Everyone has been dumped and knows the sting of grief.

[Pryde Foltz]

You have written a very expressive song.

[MsJewel]

I've heard it said time heals all wounds, but some take much longer to heal...
until my sorrow fade....
The repetition of lines is very effective in this wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading this very much.
:) Julie

[ferousfinite]

go over the chorus twice and it matches the music to a tee!

[ferousfinite]

=) Now that's more like it!

[Neon]

I loved the repetition of some lines .. lovely poem, it's a great song, i enjoyed the Rhyme ya used into the poem. I loved these lines

My days dark I am afraid
Until my sorrow fade
My heart is in pain
The love that remain

Great replacements of lines in an every stanza. Good job.