The Lost Ones

To the Lost Ones...

Oh woe how we lost you
Once we had you
Alive and well
Joy to tell

You are not here
Its been over and over a year
I love you all
My heart breaks for you all

I will hold our memories forever
Oh the life we lived together
All of how we lived, is what matters
If you were here, we could be climbing the latter's

You left us
To the best of us
Ourselves, Friends, and Foe
Away you went and here we go

Again one day, we will see
That familiar face, you and me
In another time perhaps, in another place
Just not now, in this time and space

We will miss you persons, loved ones and friends
Just know this is not the end
Good bye for now
With these words, I send.

Reviews

[J. Hampton]

well put together memorial piece i like it

[MsJewel]

You have a stellar imagination and a very unique writing style which is always a pleasure to read. No pictures needed here my friend. Your words stand strong on their own.

:) Julie

[dw817]

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What makes you think I'm naked ? :D Umm .. As for the lost ones, if you're writing about them, then they are not lost ?

And that applies in life. I think it was Spock that once said, "Captain, while I know you would rather wallow in a sea of self pity -"

To which Kirk raises his hand interrupting him and says, "Thank you, Spock."

Consider yourself found, Elijah. :)

[Neon]

Yeh .. there's really no need to add pics. because you already write so cool, your words're not even lesser than the beautiful pics. that draw some real moments of life on the readers mind. Nice poem. I liked IInd stanza and the IV stanza much. Once again it's a Rhymin' poem. I always love to read and to write rhyming pieces. Nice job once again as usual . . . you always impress me through your great stuffs.