What if...

What if...

A Poem by ferousfinite
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IS? What is "is" and "it" and what does "it" do as "is"?

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What if...

The effect of said action
is what once was
is now not
and what is
is happening now
and the outcome
will shortly be followed
by the outcome
of this said action?

© 2013 ferousfinite


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*scratches head and giggles* good question :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very creative and quite thought provoking. It's a pleasure to read your poetry!
:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


A clever poem with a clever question...Splendid...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Pattern writing in numbers: 4, 4, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3 ,4.

Literally lay out your thought like a path and doing this with numbers makes the bricks to walk upon. The script should feel good as you speak it out-loud. Being concise is important for many reasons as well. Using this method of alternating number patterns integrates with the speech patterns and becomes a melody. For Example: a crescendo to forte and then piano to coda followed by piano to crescendo and fin.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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