I can and I will

In the tree I climbed
I rested and gazed
I pondered All of the World
High up I thought I was
Time mattered less and lest I find

I tested my life against the unsaved
I rested and gazed
The message was all clear from the World
"They are All wrong" and as does
Live it right! Believe! Be Strong! Be Kind!

Warmth in my heart was my soul saved
I then knew my purpose that day raised
In the tree I climbed to see the World
Right I learned the way and as does
I love! I AM! I Have The Mind!

Reviews

[Neon]

Heyy! :)
Yeah, I know, you've got a creative mind! This poem's what that I can never compare to mine because the depth of the words you stolen from your feelings are crazy awesome. You know what, I read it twice a time cus, when I read it once, I couldn't understand what it's about but then I thought if you penned this poem then of course, there'd be something creative that made you dropping this, so, I re-read this n believe me, buddy ... it's awesome! Am thrilled to read your new stuffs cus, it's proving how hard working you are doing to flourish your flourished skills.

[ferousfinite]

A splendid review my friend! Much thanks to you and your admiration for perfect writing.

[ferousfinite]

"Warmth in my heart was my soul saved
I then knew my purpose that day raised"

This is the comparison of everyone's beliefs of the word...

Are you saved?

[Neon]

Llol! very nice question so, the answer to yer question's ... "I simply believe in myself n never let myself down!" ;)

[ferousfinite]

Thank you Chris Botti! =) for slowing down the world...