Toxic Snake

9/20/16

The toxic snake flared her glassy fangs 

And lashed out her venomous bite.

My eyes were open wide when the storm hit--

A tempest of poisonous chaos and broken hearts.

The toxic snake's venom seeped into my heart

As the deafening thunder clashed louder and louder.

When the rain settled and the thunder dulled, 

The snake was long gone-- 

Slithered away within the jungle of self loathing ignorance.

I looked at the gray sky through tear-stained eyes

And thought to myself 

"Nobody needs a toxic snake,

For they only cause a storm."

 

Reviews

[Tori Jones]

"The toxic snake's venom seeped into my heart
As the deafening thunder clashed louder and louder."

I really liked that part, it's almost like how words/actions of people feel when you really think about them and let them get to you...

[Esther]

Thank you :)

[Tori Jones]

No problem...

[Karmee]

When the rain settled and the thunder dulled,
The snake was long gone--
Slithered away within the jungle of self loathing ignorance.

Totally loved this part here,
very well written write

[Esther]

Thank you, I really appreciate your review!!