Ill Stricken Path

9/18/2016 -- Inspired by the chaos within.

Place your feet in my shoes,

You'll think the path I take is quite easy.

Climb deeply inside my ill stricken mind,

You'll see the things I see in the darkest parts of my thoughts.

Rip open my broken heart,

You'll feel the things I feel when it's four A.M. and nobody is awake.

Place your feet in the broken parts of my soul,

And you'll realize my path is not easy at all.

Reviews

[Tori Jones]

Very easy to relate to...I like this poem, very expressive...

[Esther]

Thank you! Also I apologize if any of my comments back were like, with a different profile picture? I'm not sure what was going on but I fixed it I think. I logged out and logged back in

[Tori Jones]

lol, you're fine...

[Karmee]

ip open my broken heart,
You'll feel the things I feel when it's four A.M. and nobody is awake.
Place your feet in the broken parts of my soul,
And you'll realize my path is not easy at all.

WOW!! Totally loved these lines here,
Deep and emotional, I can feel this write
awesome writing skills here.

[Esther]

Ahh thank you so much this made me so happy!!!