Remains...

_{^{The remains of love}}

_{^{Lie within a chamber of fears}}

_{^{For me to unlock my heart}}

_{^{I need the key of tears}}

_{^{Such key that leads to mystery}}

_{^{Unlocks doors to my misery}}

_{^{And such key is lost in an ocean of gloom}}

_{^{Tears and sorrow, skin pale like moon}}

_{^{Cant be found within a defiled soul}}

_{^{Cant be found in such fragility alone}}

_{^{Key to doors, unknown what lies behind}}

_{^{Infinite uknown beyond a god's decline}}

_{^{Such key that I havent found in endless time}}

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Nicew. I had to copy to make it bigger, but what i saw made it worth it.. Loved the flow, the meaning inside each word.. The ending.. perfect.. Keep up the good work..

Mag xx

[Fallen Angel]

I liked this poem. It has a good flow and you had my attention through the whole poem. Keep it up!

Chantel

[Tori]

I particularly liked the word choice in this poem. Each word carried on the feel of sadness and the melancholy nature of the poem. Good job! I liked it. :)