The Fault in MY Stars

Inspired by the movie

What is the point of this
hollow bleak existence?
Wandering around like a lifeless zombie
shuffling from one place to another.

 

Is there logic in our pain?
the blinding soul destroying pain
it demands to be felt doesn't it?
but why by us?

 

Is there a reason for our survival?
when we are all died no one will remember us?
We are like the dinosaurs wandering this earth
waiting for our meteor to strike us dead,
to crush us into oblivion.

Author's Note

((So I watched Fault in our stars at work the other day and I got all philosophical and this is what came of it. I know its kind of a depressing thought but that movie just left me depressed.)

Reviews

[TheLostMind]

This actually is a very though-provoking piece.
"Is there logic in our pain?" - Nope. If there was any logic in our pain, we would have had a solution. We would have escaped this insanity. Love "just" fall in love... and what it leaves behind has no logic either...

"when we are all died no one will remember us?" (assuming you meant "dead") - people who really cared for us will remember us. My question is why should they?.

A good write...

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes dear Poet. I have asked these questions often in my life.
"Is there logic in our pain?
the blinding soul destroying pain
it demands to be felt doesn't it?
but why by us?"
I believe we must walk the walk of free mind. World will create prisons of mind and life if we allow. We ain't dead till we can't fight no-more. I enjoyed the poem. Made me think today. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote