Reminiscing

past and present

That moment

when everything you once knew

is stole from you 

and you don't know how to get it back.

And all you want to do 

is just jump into that black void 

filled with shadows of the past 

Just to keep the pain of the present at bay.

Author's Note

This was made up from the top of my head.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful words. Reminiscing. Can stand alone and create regret and memory. I enjoyed the short poem. You said a lot in the words. Making the reader feel the shadows gone and things we cannot find. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Fenix Flight]

^-^ thank you for your kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[nicholasfitz]

A worthy poem. Very short. Very melancholic, and very beautiful and true to the human soul.

[Lazerbagels]

This is what I can't do. I've never been able to just create powerful things to say, you do it well. Good poem.

[Fenix Flight]

Why Thank you

[RAOrourke]

Beautiful sentiment and rings true for so many. Hit me hard! As if you had spoken to what life has been like for me lately. Well done! The only suggestion I would have is "is stole from you" I would change this to stolen...great job!

[Mayank]

so true, we loath the pain of present and but nurture the pain from past.

[Chris]

how an effort comes into being makes it no less valid...

many can relate to this one Fenix... life does that to people.