Shattered Tales old as Time

Shattered Tales old as Time

A Chapter by Fenix Flight
"

Beauty and the Beast

"

Tale as old as time
Song as old as rhyme
Beauty and the Beast.


A tale told so long ago

Different names, same old tune

Of the Beauty and the Beast


The Beauty so grand high up on her pedestal

The bad boy Beast with a mean reputation

drawn together by some mystical force.


The Beauty so proper so poise

the Beast rough and tumble

Falling in and out of love


The Beast does something

the Beauty runs for the hills

The Beast goes to claim her back


Same old tune

its getting a little old

When will that Beauty learn?


Maybe that Beast is nothing more then a Beast

Never going to change his ways so why try?

Why does she always have Beauty but never brains?



© 2014 Fenix Flight


Author's Note

Fenix Flight
If he OR She is a horrible person why are we always lured back? why do we live with toxic relationships?

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There is something disconcerting about how much we value these kind of toxic relationships. Someone could swear over and over that they will not do something again, but that doesn't mean that they really won't. And we value beauty over brains, which is another huge issue with society nowadays. Well said. One suggestion I have is to choose capitalize "beauty" and "beast" throughout for consistency.

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B.J
Brilliant, relationships sometimes are the question of life. So hard to understand. Toxic relationships, Oh! how we have to go back and forth at times. Very well written and told beautifully

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Thank you so much for all your comments :-D you have made my day :-D I'm so happy you like my writti.. read more
B.J

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I can understand believe me
There is something disconcerting about how much we value these kind of toxic relationships. Someone could swear over and over that they will not do something again, but that doesn't mean that they really won't. And we value beauty over brains, which is another huge issue with society nowadays. Well said. One suggestion I have is to choose capitalize "beauty" and "beast" throughout for consistency.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fenix Flight

10 Years Ago

Thanks Will Do!!!!

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Please Call me Fenix (Fen-nicks) (The FEN is pronouced the same way you would pronouce the FEN in Fenway) its more my name then the one I was given at birth. I wont put my life story here. You will se.. more..

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