Shattered True Loves Kiss

Enchanted

I've been dreaming of a true love's kiss,
And a prince I'm hoping comes with this
That's what brings ever-aftering so happy
And that's the reason we need lips so much
For lips are the only things that touch
So to spend a life of endless bliss
Just find who you love through true love's kiss

I've been dreaming Of a true love that's mine

But He was not the prince I hoped would come with this

He didn't bring me ever-aftering that was so happy

And our lips were the only things touching

Instead of life of endless bliss, I got a life of misery

So to find a love of hell, find it through "true love's kiss"

Don't be so quick to fall in love

Stand your ground and find someone worthy

If it takes forever then so be it

Don't be so hasty, it wont make you any less lonely

Find the man that treats you right

with all the little things he does

Not the man that's so quick to tell you

 what you need to hear

Author's Note

Don't go looking/seeking for love. You'll just find it in all the wrong places.
True love will find you. just be patient

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

I am not all that familiar with Enchanted, the only part of that movie that stood out to me was that Idina Menzel was in it. Regardless, this sent another good message. Look before you leap. Just because someone tells you what you want to hear, doesn't mean it is what is good for you.

One thing:

Put He was not the prince I hoped would come with this

Was "put" supposed to be "but"?

[Fenix Flight]

OOPS!!! thanks!!!!! will fix

[B.J]

Great work and life's messages sent to us by a great art of penmanship and thought. Well done