Shattered Mermaid fun

Shattered Mermaid fun

A Chapter by Fenix Flight
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The little Mermaid

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Up where they walk, up where they run
Up where they stay all day in the sun

Wanderin' free - wish I could be
Part of that world


Up where they run, and fall clumsily down

Up where they stay and get burned in the sun

Are they really free, do you really wish to be

Part of our world?


Do you want to trade your life away?

To be like the cool kids?

Squish down your individualism

Give up what makes you you?

just to be Part of our world?

 

Lose yourself completely

think with the group, not by yourself

Give up your own unique style for fit and trendy clothes.

Give up your old friends, for all the popular crowds

Just to be Part of our world?


Don't be silly

don't be a fool

Don't give  up you!

You can still be part of our world


Just by being you!



© 2014 Fenix Flight


Author's Note

Fenix Flight
Be proud of who you are.. Don't give it up for some silly Idea of the Popular Crowd..> its not worth it.. trust me

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This was so great! You took Ariel's individualism and turned it into something modern that a younger crowd could easily understand. There is no reason to give up your quirks or your voice to be a part of something. It is so much better to be one of a kind than multi-manufactured. Lovely work!

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Fenix Flight

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for believing in me and helping me with this Idea :-D :-D :-D If it wasn't for you.. read more
Ashira Macy

10 Years Ago

That is great to hear, I am always glad to help! They are all really fun so far, you are doing a gre.. read more



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Perfection, in words of old....I love this part


Do you want to trade your life away?

To be like the cool kids?

Squish down your individualism

Give up what makes you you?

just to be Part of our world?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was so great! You took Ariel's individualism and turned it into something modern that a younger crowd could easily understand. There is no reason to give up your quirks or your voice to be a part of something. It is so much better to be one of a kind than multi-manufactured. Lovely work!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fenix Flight

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for believing in me and helping me with this Idea :-D :-D :-D If it wasn't for you.. read more
Ashira Macy

10 Years Ago

That is great to hear, I am always glad to help! They are all really fun so far, you are doing a gre.. read more

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Fenix Flight
Fenix Flight

Kingdom Of Amythest, ME



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Please Call me Fenix (Fen-nicks) (The FEN is pronouced the same way you would pronouce the FEN in Fenway) its more my name then the one I was given at birth. I wont put my life story here. You will se.. more..

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