My Pain in 11 Words

A Poem by Fenix Flight

11 words

Bite my lip

giggle

slice
A little piece of heaven dies

© 2014 Fenix Flight

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Jennie Baron

An intriguing 11 words, for sure. One could read all kinds of meaning into them. Well done!

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Angel55606

Love this! You explain your pain so easily. And these 11 words are packed with such broud emotion :)

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Fenix Flight

Kingdom Of Amythest, ME

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Please Call me Fenix (Fen-nicks) (The FEN is pronouced the same way you would pronouce the FEN in Fenway) its more my name then the one I was given at birth. I wont put my life story here. You will se.. more..

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