Her Eyes

Look into her eyes

And you'll see her pain

 

Look into her eyes

And you'll see her fear

 

Look into her eyes

And you'll see pure love

Reviews

[Shekinah2015]

I really enjoyed reading your poem, Fenix. It's definitely thought provoking and a great start! You can try making it longer, but I think it sounds great at it's present length. Fantastic work, and keep writing!

[Fenix Flight]

Thank you so much! Im glad you enjoyed it ^-^