But I'm Still Here!!

My world has been rocked

Shattered to the core.]

 

 But I'm still here!

 

All the failures of my life

Whiz past me

Howling like the wind.

 

BUT I'm still here!

 

The razor looks friendly

Offering me its bitter comfort

To let my sorrow pour out.

 

BUT I'M still here!

 

Depression sings

his posioned song

Wanting me for himself

 

BUT I'M STILL here!

 

Come close to the edge

My feet stepping over.

Staring down into the Abyss

 

BUT I'M STILL HERE!!!!!!!!!

Author's Note

A poem about hope when everthing around you is screaming that there is none

Reviews

[ron]

I feel like that some days. Yes I have one I look at from time to time. It does have a sweet song that feels bitter when it's held, a sweet bitterness...

This is a great poem Fenix, I hope those who need it will read it.

[Fenix Flight]

thanks hun:-D ^-^

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Hawk Flight]

And Still here you must stay!

[Fenix Flight]

What are you Yoda???????

[Hawk Flight]

Yoda I am not, though Hawk I am

[Fenix Flight]

OMG *flops over and laughs* you are such a Nerd

[Hawk Flight]

I am a nerd and proud of it.

[Fenix Flight]

hahaha ^-^

[larryb]

Nicely penned with a good flow...dark but to the point..I suffer from PBA so i know those Dark places....But Im Still Here 2 :)

[Fenix Flight]

And you are the picture of True Strength. if you can still stand strong even though all you want to do is fall and breakk... Others who do this.. thats true strength as well.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hmm quite a provoking piece you have here but I LIke it :) Nicely written :) Ohh tip Everything happens for a reason that's why you still here :) One day it will all add up And bang :) Good luck and continue writing :)

[Fenix Flight]

Thank you so much for your kindess :-D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Your words honest and true. Sometime we need to tell people. I'm here and I need you with me near. No weakness in the amazing poem.

[Fenix Flight]

Thank you so much!!! ^-^