My Fallen Angel

Jose

A love I always held

 Locked away in my heart

 My fallen angel.

 

As I fell asleep

I would always feel

Broken tattered wings

Wrap around me

Protecting me.

 

But now I realize

How selfish I had become.

Keeping him to me

Never truly able to give him

What he desperately wanted

My whole heart.

 

My fallen angel hurt

Yet I kept him to me

Chained by words

Of I love you.

 

I realize now

I see my wrong doing.

It kills me

A piece of me has died.

 

My fallen angel

I set you free.

 

My fallen angel

No more.

Reviews

[KAREN]

Keep writing. Tis poem is well crafted!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW, this piece is so touching, it's very beautifully written. Nicely penned. :-)

[Fenix Flight]

thank you its to a friend of mine I hold dear

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. Your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you.

[Fenix Flight]

I was being so selfish keeping to me even though I couldnt love him fully. So I set him free. I hope he will be happy finding a new love.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

I'm sure you had your reasons why, sometimes setting free those who you care about the most is the hardest thing to do. Some things sometimes aren't meant to be, even though how much you want them to be. I'm sure He'll find someone that will make him happy and so will you. :-)

[Fenix Flight]

Hahha thats the thing. I am happily engaged. The person in this poem is about my best friend who Ive always had a spot in my heart for. Buuuuut i obviously coudlnt love him the way he wanted since im engaged. Its was like a i love you but im not in love with you kinda thing. If that makes ANY SENCE what so ever

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Oh ok, I understand.

[Fenix Flight]

Yeah........