Wired&Tired

Wired&Tired

A Poem by Fenix Flight
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A deadly Combo

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Only getting half an hour of sleep
Down an AMP
Liquid energy

Walk on to work
Knee give out
Sprain and twist
ankle and knee

Body tired
eyes dropping low
Amp buzzing through my veins
So Wired its comical

Every time my eyes drift close
PING
They pop wide open

I'm Wired and Tired
And I'm ready to go.

© 2014 Fenix Flight


Author's Note

Fenix Flight
Sorry I've only had half hour of sleep and I am about to crash from exhaustion.
I've been up since 11:30PM (6/24/14) and I cant go back to bed until 6:00PM (6/25/14)

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It's funny. But it's not funny...
Hope you start sleeping soon darlin'

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sounds like you're overly excited about something!!! O______O Get some sleep, woman! XD

One thing I noticed was "Every time my eye drift close" should either be:
1) "Every time my eyes drift close"
OR
2) "Every time my eye drifts close"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Puffle

10 Years Ago

Ah, okay, lol. Hopefully work doesn't wear you down too much :)
Fenix Flight

10 Years Ago

Haha for the next like two three weeks I am going to be operating on half hour to no sleep every nig.. read more
Puffle

10 Years Ago

O_______________O Omigosh! That's freaking insane! -.- Good luck!!!!

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Added on June 25, 2014
Last Updated on July 28, 2014

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Fenix Flight
Fenix Flight

Kingdom Of Amythest, ME



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Please Call me Fenix (Fen-nicks) (The FEN is pronouced the same way you would pronouce the FEN in Fenway) its more my name then the one I was given at birth. I wont put my life story here. You will se.. more..

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