Never good enough

I try my hardest 

 To be close to you again. 

 To erase the past

 Of hate and distance. 

 But its times like this 

That i wonder if i made the right choice. 

 immature 

rude 

disrespectful 

Words you scream to me. 

Dont you see what they do? 

 Do you have any idea 

The affect you have on me? 

You dont see the tears i hide 

 You dont see the strength I pretend to have. 

 Because I know if I cry 

You'll just say to stop being a child. 

 All I can say is 

 Im sorry 

 Mama

 Im sorry I didnt turn out 

 The way you wanted me to 

 Im sorry

 I know 

 Im never good enough 

 I know 

 Im nothing but 

 Disappointment

Reviews

[Amber Lily]

Very strong emotional story in this poem. I think this is very relatable because everyone feels like this at some point in their lives. I did, but it got much better and now I've very proud of myself. Just like I'm proud of you for writing this wonderful poem. :)

[Fenix Flight]

why thank you ^-^

[Hawk Flight]

You know Mama LF loves you. she is just crabby and grumpy all the time and lashes out you know this. BUt you should tell her how you feel. I know I'm not one to talk about expressing feelings that doesnt mean you shouldnt express them either.

[Fenix Flight]

Sigh yeah yeah yeah I know

[Hawk Flight]

dont yeah yeah yeah me missy

[Fenix Flight]

Yeah Yeah Yeah :-P

[Hawk Flight]

*growls* -.-

[Fenix Flight]

Grrrr. I can growl to see Grrrrrr