Once Was

A song actually

Who I use to be

will forever be a part of me

there's nothing I can do

Its who I am Through and through.

 

~

 

She use to be oh so bold.

Never had a care in the world.

She stood tall with her head held high.

Confident walk with an atittude to match.

 

She never let her self fall

Never let herself be blinded

By.. All.. The... silly.... things in life.

 

~

 

Who I use to be
will forever be a part of me
there's nothing I can do
Its who I am Through and through.

 

~

 

A child of the darkness

A child with no mercy

Her heart frozen solid

 

Not caring who she hurt

leave bodies in her wake

She.. didnt... care.. about.. anyone

 

~

 

Who I use to be
will forever be a part of me
there's nothing I can do
Its who I am Through and through.

~

 

No matter what I do

She will always be lurking

in the deepest shadows

of my heart

 

She will

try to

claw her

way through

 

~

 

who I use to be

will forever be apart of me

 

~

 

Who I use to be
will forever be a part of me
there's nothing I can do
Its who I am Through and through.

 

Who I use to be
will forever be a part of me
there's nothing I can do
Its who I am Through and through.

 

 

Author's Note

Havent written a song in a while. What do you guys think?

Reviews

[Amber Lily]

I love this! I've written similar things (but they aren't on my page) about who I used to be being chained up inside my head because I don't want her to ever come out. I can tell your writing is straight from your mind and your not afraid to show it. Loved it :)

[Fenix Flight]

"Chained up inside my head" Huh that is a really neat image! I would love to write something using that. But I hate to plagerize or take other peoples words. so lol *shuts mouth before I dig myself deeper*

[Amber Lily]

Lol if you change up the adjectives you so could. It's a common feeling so be creative when you explain it in your words :)

[Fenix Flight]

Haha thanks.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write, beautiful piece. Nicely written.

Kaze~ :)

[Fenix Flight]

thank you so much ^-^

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Lauren]

Who I used to be will forever be a part of me...

True words. Great lyrics. :)

[A. Amos]

I truly adore your song, once you give music please do send me...would love to see these words in a live form...

[Fenix Flight]

I dont play any insturment so I cant put music to this. But I do have a melody when I sing it lol

[A. Amos]

that is cool and you're most welcome