Young grasshopper

I hope this doesnt get me in trouble

I shake my head at you

Your eagerness is charming

Your willingness overpowering

 

You're much to eager

to jump in this world

Like a child cannon balling

into the Pool

creating ripples

whereever he goes

 

Your much to willinging

to participate

but you must walk

before you can run

so you don't trip and fall

 

Don't stumble on these words

that float easily to your head

Take a breath

Stand back for a few

and reevaluate

 

simplicity is a good thing

to much can ruin

 

don't think me scolding

don't think me cruel

I'm just trying to help you

one writer

too another.

Author's Note

Crap I hope the person this is meant for doesnt FLIP out on me. BUt hey he said he like critisism. I'm jsut trying to do it in a way I know how.
(the person who this is for if you read it message me your comments PLEASE)