You and Me

Please.
Please whisper in my ear

that you care.
Hold my hand

and tell me you'll always be there.
Walk with me

and never look back.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

Oh, yes. In just a few short words you have expressed what we all feel or have felt. I love the last two lines the most. Great job! :)

[Fenix Flight]

THank you ^-^ I'm always afraid that my short poems will fall short.

[Madalyn Beck]

Not at all! Sometimes, you don't need to say a lot, plus it leaves more to the imagination of the reader. :)

[Fenix Flight]

Thank you so much for your comment. it means alot :-D