The Darkness, It calls To me

decending into madness
Its radaiting through my body
Capturing my heart and soul
what was once pure light
is now pure darkness.

My eyes
a once vivd blue
now tinted
a cold black

I feel it spreading
coating me in a heavy web
I feel it calling to me
Wanting me for itself

it calls to me
Like a man to his lover
Begging me
whispering tantalizing promises
making my body crave and want it

The darkness within me
It calls to me
It wants me

And I want it .

Reviews

[Puffle]

This reminds me of a scene in book three of the Phoenix Cycle that I'm currently writing. The third book is called The True Phoenix (is it sad that I had to look back at my notes to remember this?). One of the main characters is captured by the opposing side and is given a serum that changes his heart from good to evil, and the evil side sorta beckons him and urges him onward. When I read this that's exactly what it reminded me of, so great job! XD

[Honey-Bee]

I can feel this happening to you in the poem. Good write!

[Fenix Flight]

Hehe thank you.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Brilliantly written, so well described. Bravo my friend.

Kaze~ :-)

[Fenix Flight]

THank you so much ^-^

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[FireFox9]

Well done I like it a lot. Short but great overall. Fox-