That Last Night We Shared

To Matt

Do you rememebr?
That last night we shared?
Under the stars
As we slow danced.

Our song softly playing
from my cell phone speakers
how do you know when its love

You held me close
your forehead touching mine
Arms around my waist
arms around your neck

Did you know?
That that is the memory
I keep with me
everywhere I go

Did you know?
that that is the memory
that helps me get through

Reviews

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

it is very true memories are immortal , this is a very beautiful write...

please go through the first line and fix the TYPO in there,
how do you know when its love( i think we might use it's instead)

Did you know?
that that is the memory( i think we might add a comma between the two that(s)..but i might be wrong ..this is very pure, simple yet very touching poem i love it.

[Fenix Flight]

The How do you know when its love is the name of a song and they dont put it's in the song title so I was just following what they put lol. :-D

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

wonderful, hence am saying i would be wrong thanks for clarity keep up the good writting

[Fenix Flight]

Thank you so much ^-^

[Askew]

Poems about past memories like this are one of the many reasons I continue to write poetry

[Fenix Flight]

THE person this is too is no longer in my life. I am now happily married with a beautifful baby boy and a little girl in heaven

[Coyote Poetry]

"Did you know?
That that is the memory
I keep with me
everywhere I go"
Good memories become gold with time. I understand the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

This is so sweet and full of love. -sighing- I wish I had a memory like this one.

[Fenix Flight]

ANd One day you will Hun. :-D

[ron]

I know, but until then I will dream of such memories.