This is How an Angel Dies

popped in my head when I was Half asleep

Act upon
the Devilish thoughts
in your mind

this is how an Angel dies

Slit your wrists
and bathe
in the crimson river

this is how an Angel dies

Turn your back
against your faith
and everything you know

this is how an Angel dies

Reviews

[theladygraceling]

This is really sad but I like it. The only thing that I have a problem with is the typos ("an" instead of "and" and "bath" instead of "bathe". This is an emotional, deep poem and the typos keep it from being as good as it could be. Other than that, I enjoyed reading this. Great job.

[Fenix Flight]

thank you so much!!! I will change those errors right away!!!!!!!!!