Depression

                                 Darkness rising 
                       from the ashes 
                             of Shattered dreams 

                         Fueled by tears of pain 
                          and screams of terror 

                 Hungry for blood 
          death soon follows

            leaving lifeless bodies in its wake

 

Reviews

[Honey-Bee]

Wow! Darkness rising from the ashes of shattered dreams: Deep! Love the writing! Keep up the good work!

[MsJewel]

Dark and powerful...you have said so much in so few words. Exceptional writing!

:) Julie

[BloodySkye]

I like the first part. Depression is a dark thing but deep down we have the strength to fight it. Good write.