the flower in the snow

i do not know why i wrote this.all i know is i did this during class.

As i ascend to my deep slumber,

I hear the sound of newly cut lumber.

the sounds of icy winds haunt me,

As well as i will never be free.

As i lay on my snowy grave,

I am worried that i will never be saved.

I am blinded with out my sight,

For i am buried in a field of white.

Slowly my flesh is being consumed by the winter snow,

Is death to be my only foe?

If you are death,then i welcome you.

because dying is the only thing i can do. 

As my bones freezes over time.

my voice will forever remain in this rhyme.

My blood has been spread all over this land.

Soon my body will turn into sand.

Although my soul will leave this earth,

Forever my blood will run through the snowy dirt.

winter will eventually disappear and a single flower will bloom,

For it shall be tainted red and bring unending doom

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Greaty great Felli, your poems enticed me so much *friendly smile*
Your poems are awesome
100/100
the rhythm and rhyme goes welll
Please do keep writing (: