phantom in the dark

this just a fantasy i made up

You lure me with  those elusive stare,

I wonder how long will it be there.

You, who is suited for the dark,

Has tainted me with your mark.

 

You take me away into some kind of illusion.

Is the love i feel for you my conclusion?

You bear the crest that I despise.

But still, I want you to enchant me with those alluring eyes.

 

You have saved me from the memories of  the man I once loved.

And yet I felt so confused that you make me feel so beloved.

Why is it you my heart is beating for?

At the same time my chest starts to sore.

 

Why have you given me this curse?

I do not know as to why I am so immersed.

You tormented me, shamed me, but why is it you love me?

I am afraid that even if it hurts our love can never be

 

Why is it you returned me to my home?

After you made feel this way I feel trapped in a dome.

Before you go tell me who you are,

So your existence will be forever etched within my heart.

Reviews

[Castonovia]

Definitely kind of like the Phantom of the Opera... poetic, lyrical words that have great flow and rhthym!!! Altogether an enchanting piece :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Great poem... just like Phantom in the Opera... or Kaito from Cantarella..
Lol this is really great
100/100

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Great fantasy poem! Keep writing! 100/100