heart break

this poem tells about my first love and how he broke my heart without knowing it

 I've fallen for you, even though you aren't that smart,

You left me memories within my heart.

I've always looked at you from the shadows,

But you only see me as a mere fellow.

All these years and all these months,I have always been beside you,

And yet you were the only person I could never fully talk to.

I remember you held my hand when we were little,

At the same time, you've made my heart very brittle.

The pain in my heart grew even more,

When I saw you chase another girl through the door.

When I realized it ,My heart shatters.

All I could hear is your joyous laughter.

Especially when I found out that she was my friend,

I knew my love for had to end.

Without you knowing it, You left me broken hearted,

I Should have known from the day it started.

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I've said this five or six times to fellow writers... sorry to repeat it,,,
A scar which is healed through the course of time... will be beautiful...
I hope you're heart will heal in time (;

[felli]

thank you for viewing my poems, but i would really like to see your opinion on this because it means a lot to me, since i'm new and all. same goes for my other works as well so please tell me what you think.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Aww this is such a sad poem. No one should have to hurt like this but I know that doesn't stop it from happening. I hope if your writing from experiece that you feel better soon.

[felli]

sorry this a bit late,but thank you for making me feel great

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

every1 deserves to feel great ur very welcome