My cup of life is similar to my cup of coffee; i never liked coffee with water, i always find it strong, I’d rather prefer milk coffee, I like the cappuccino creamy delicious & soft… I often want to have my milk coffee at the office, in order to get it, I need to bring milk, put it in the fridge and being ready to not find it, a great work I felt am not ready for it; Suddenly I got the brilliant idea to buy a sort of ready coffee, a strange mix I put it with warm water and wawww I get my coffee …my milk coffee.
I felt excited about the idea , tried it but NO it didn’t work, neither the smell nor the taste was like a coffee, I felt upset but never gave up, tried again , add some pure coffee , it was better but not “real” coffee, I added canella some rose water…. I tried more and more till what??? Till I forgot what is a” real” coffee looks like… this is…
I never lived my life, I always walked around behind and around, till I forgot the “real” meaning of life; Why have I always missed my life, escaped my life, why have I always avoided my life, I always tried to be perfect but am not, I can’t and I don’ have to be, I’m not supposed to be… and then what is perfect?? I never took ways where I can feel fall fail fight and have more f… I always took easy soft ways, I always add flavours to a “fake” life, I always spend time in decorating a “shadow” of life instead of making a “real” life; Why ??? Because… because I always feel worried from the beginning; before I could start, I’m careful too much careful badly careful sadly careful, I know it is stupid… why shall I care about a life I never had? Why shall I save a life I never had before? Why???
You remember when we were talking about “ tears and happiness”; I just told you I never experienced “crying from happiness”, you just told me “ may be because you never lived an extreme happiness”, I felt shocked “ Is it true?” but it is true it can be we live the whole life to say one day “ I never lived my life” the life I want …
I tried to live, I seemed to be alive, I lived for others, I saw others living, I admire others living But I never lived my life…
'I’d rather prefer milk coffee" - you do not need the rather. You cannot use the rather and prefer together.
I'd prefer milk coffee OR I would rather have milk coffee.
"at the office, in order to get it, I need"
After the first comma, you need a connecting word such as 'however'.
The second comma is then not needed.
Please note that I am not sure of the layout you are going for, so excuse me if these comments are not what you were looking for. Either way, good luck.
Great life metaphors! Life can be so complicated, I have come to a conclusion that it is good to taste the coffee both ways, sweetened with milk and dark with bitterness, in that way we will know and enjoy the flavor of each.
'I’d rather prefer milk coffee" - you do not need the rather. You cannot use the rather and prefer together.
I'd prefer milk coffee OR I would rather have milk coffee.
"at the office, in order to get it, I need"
After the first comma, you need a connecting word such as 'however'.
The second comma is then not needed.
Please note that I am not sure of the layout you are going for, so excuse me if these comments are not what you were looking for. Either way, good luck.