Promises...

I promised to give you breakfast in bed

I promised to never make you sad

I promised to be your angel when you’re ill

I promised to wait you every night

I promised to be your light

I promised to never sleep when you are angry

I promised to make you the happiest

I promised to forgive you

I promised, I promised and I promised

But I didn’t keep my promises

They flied high in the sky

Since you suddenly have gone

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[-Scribe in Style-]

I read this again...
Never make a promise
So you'll never break a promise
Never make a promise
So you'll never see the ray of hope....
Which would you want to live with?

[-Scribe in Style-]

I do like this. The repetition and then the break in rhythm. It shows the change in sequence.
Check out my poem - 'However You Are'
Let me know what you think of it.