Motionless I lay

    Motionless I lay.

 

Motionless I lay,

still on the ground.

The world surrounds me,

dancing around.

 

 

It's a beautiful day.

Bright & clear.

I'm alone in this meadow,

not a soul near.

 

 

The grass cold & crisp,

smooth against my skin.

The smell of the earth,

I slowly breath in.

 

 

The sun warms my body,

my soul & mind.

A pleasure so inspiring,

truly devine.

 

 

The clouds light & soft,

whisps in the sky.

How smooth they flow,

an effortless glide.

 

 

The brook babbles slowly,

a peaceful sound.

Like the whisper of

an angle, nowhere to be found.

 

 

I absorb it all,

my tranquil surroundings.

While I lay still,

motionless, dreaming.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

pretty.

[Teni]

wow, gives me a sense of isolation from the rest of the crazy world of mankind. Makes me feel quite anew in power and mind, and i don't really know what u'll gain from this mini-poem, but my headaches gone :P thanks. tis quite nice... i mean my headache being gone, but ur poems nice too :P