The Divorce

The Divorce

A Poem by F.B. Lindsey

Cool kitchen table

Holding me up

What did you just say?

I dont understand.

Ozzy Osborne

Crooning in there

Is it my fault momma?

Tears hit the table and sizzle

I just don’t understand.

Is he eating another bat?

It’s nobody’s fault?

Then why are you leaving?

More sizzle.

I still don’t understand.

© 2015 F.B. Lindsey


Charlie
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Cool table, yet tears that sizzle. Interesting poem! Thought provoking...

Posted 9 Years Ago


F.B. Lindsey

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Divorce is painful for everyone involved. Children in particular.
I like your unique delivery,

Posted 9 Years Ago


F.B. Lindsey

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Got a nice fresh approach with this poem, with the conversation angle, I like it!
You need some quotation marks!

Posted 9 Years Ago


F.B. Lindsey

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the encouragement and input!
Could it be you don't pay enough attention to her? Diversions like ozzy can really be a metaphor for a love that is lost. Mama, there's no home to come to anymore. Good poem and welcome.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

F.B. Lindsey

9 Years Ago

Thx for the encouragement!

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