A short Vanilla Somersault

A style of poem writing the relies on creativity and randomness of the choice of words. Let the unconscious express itself.

Sometimes words express what they do not speak
Like coconuts on shells but why with milk?
They might keep you digging for the meaning you seek
But in the end to begin and this is no trick

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I would really appreciate comments, suggestions and criticisms.
Thank you very much.

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Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Not sure why you didn't post the whole poem here. I am reluctant to go to another page. Your poem looked promising. Lydi*

[fbesares]

I have published the poem on a site, so that I can earn. I just wanted to learn more and improve because I know, I am not a good poem writer.