Breaking Loose

The Story about Hyderabad city in 2063, Post Apocalypse

05-12-2063

Hyderabad

i jus woke up to wen i heard the noise of water drops but already been 6 years it last rained,

this world already breaking down,

it is 20th dream whr it rained in my dream with lush green tress and overshadow climate,

My name is Nizam, I was 26 yr old frm last 49 years..,

I am stuck in this world every 1 sec is converted to countless days

Welcome to the Time Lapse Era 

long before we human became more greedy and dangerous and inventious we destroyed our own path by doing so.,

we went with full force without having a plan to go back to it

It right what they say there is no turning back i guess thr is no freaking way to get back,

Nizam goes out in search of food, as the times reverted back to where one hunts and feeds on it

Nizam:- I always carry this beautiful b***h with me (refering to the shot gun ) you never know whats lirking in behind

Nizam hides in one of the typical old city house, the whole old city looks damned and empty as there is dark and very rough climate

Nizam:- what you see up flying above 450 year old chrminar is a Dragons which were awakend by humans in their mediocre socila networking era

Nizam hides till those dragons moves towards hitech city which is now nothing but waste of concreate material,

Nizam:- Everyone thought these creatures are mythical, but you got to see what you believe in,

these m***********s still hunting human after they completely wiped out human race in the areas near hitech city, Nobody knows whether any still lives there may be its's their luch or may be not

Nizam then taking a deer which he just shot with his shotgun..,and takes back to his home in golconda

Nizam:- It's only area where a sizable number of human race is still here surviving, Evryone bring something here so that everycan share and gather hope . it's getting dark and humans has made a underground place.., where they hide in night,

Trust me boy boy u dnt want to be on ground in night u r eyes are not meant to see what has become of this place and things tht live here now!

An old Man Victor aged around 60 comes up to Nizam and silently takes him to a small chamber like room

Victor :- You look very intrigued..,

Nizam :- I'm bloody intrigued from the time i have been struck here.,

You gotta understand we don't have enough things to which we can prey on ., So that we can feed these peoples, there will come a time where there will be no food and these people will eat each other

Victor :- Nizam they are your people, You are the only one who can lead them out of this purgatory to Light that we all seek very badly,

Nizam ;- Thanxs but i'm not really keen on having messiah complex again, i am lone wolf.

and besides it is easy to survive when you are alone

A woman aged 25 enters in the room with a veil covering her face, Her looks and make 100 of men go down on their knees at same time, Yet still very few have really seen her face, It is believed that the face behind her veil can make demon and angel fall for her ,

Zed that's what they call her,

She looks very mysteriosly towards Nizam,

One day Victor introduced Zed to his people as his beloved wife no one knew anything regarding Zed,She was my this anonymous girl before getting married ti Victor.

Victor is very possesive about Zed,

Nizam get's out of room and accidently bumps into Akimitsu Tsukasa 

Akimitsu :- Tell me did you saw them today ?

Nizam :- I saw nothing ., 

Akimitsu:- Do you believe what these people are saying ?

Nizam :- What are they saying ?

Akimitsu :- about Vlad the Tepes The Lord of vampires

Nizam :- i dont believe in rumours, I believe in what i see 

Akimitsu :- It is believed hes been praying on human for centuries and now he has his own army of undead who are desperately looking for blood.

Nizam :- Fear, It can force you to believe in lies and deceptions.

Akimitsu Tsukasa aged about 35 yr, He is frm Tokyo, Japan.

He was a Yakuza before he got stuck here, he worked for a powerful crime boss Shinobu Tsukasa who was his uncle, he is often not given much of the task in his yakuza days as his temper killed several men, He is spoilt brat and Very dangerous with this sword.

A woman comes running to Nizam 

Woman: I cannot see my daughter here

Niam:- What ? are you sure ?

Woman :- Yes,i looked everywhere she is nowhere to be find,

Akimitsu:- What's her age?

Woman:- 14 years

Nizam :- Did she jus got out ? No it cant be the trech door opened and closed when i got in 

Where the heck she might have gone..,

Akimitsu:- May be your forgetting some one else might not be here too

Nizam :- Damn you Raman! 

Nizam and Akimitsu runs to end of place where there is small passage which further gets underneath the ground where they see a room

the screams of girl coming out of the room,

Nizam and Akimitsu break the door. 

They see Raman trying to rape this girl, Nizam pull him over and seperates him frm the girl,

Akimitsu punches him on his jaw, and holds him as Nizam keeps beating him to the pulp

Nizam :- You bloody Pervert (takes out his rifle and keeps at point blank)

Raman :- Laughing like maniac, kill me, Pull the bloody trigger and laughing again

Nizam:- You are sick, 

Raman :- Thank you, I dont need your applause, I dnt need these people, i dnt need this world, I dnt need any of it

i want to go back where i can put my c**k in it's deserving place and rape every one and dnt get caught rather than killed by a Black angel,

Nizam:- you deserve to die in every world,

Akimitsu:- Black Angel ?

 Raman :- Yeah, No one believes when i tell them 

Nizam :- Shut your mouth, to Akimitsu  - he is freaking liar

Tie him here, 

Raman is 38 yr man with tonsure, He is already been to jail for allegedly killing his wife, Court had to let him free cause of no evidence, Many believe he might have actually eaten his wife, 

since then, he is reportedly raped and killed many young girls, He is master in slipping out of law with the loop holes in it,

A sadist, A pevert, A Rapist, A carivour and A genius, Very very well read and educated man tough

Author's Note

Hey please help me out, I just finished this much of story, What do you have to say ? what are the mistakes i am making, please help me you review will benefit me?
and please let me know if the story has hooked you