A girl with a heart broken face

 

When I go out that room

I don't remember whether I flushed the toilet, then who?

 

I cry for 1 hour then I sleep because of pain

I look like a bogy then!

 

My face becomes yellow.

My lips bugle like a pillow.

 

My right eye looks like an almond

And the other one forms like a diamond

 

Around them I see dark circles

Nothing will save me even miracles

 

I look myself in the mirror

Then I cry a cello

 

I ask her who are you?

She answers I am you a big fool

 

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

This is curiously intriguing in the most great of ways...

[Hanan_Maliah]

I can see myself in this poem so naturally I like it...even if its not the pretty kind...we all have different facets to our lives...and I can be the biggest of fools...so join the club dear friend...

[Wildecat]

I think you are being to hard on yourself. We all make mistakes but hopefully we learn from them. Nice write.