Legit?

May be the stars look at us
and see us shining too!

Reviews

[BL]

I would think we are bright, but maybe not that bright. You bring to light the unique human perspective which I think is very distorted - thank you I enjoyed this

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks Leigh. I know I suck at posting back but happened to visit here after a long time.

[Gray]

That's a nice thought. I wonder if they can see the good people brighter than the bad ones.

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha...tbh, I secretly wish for the same to happen:) But wait, those who are bad would be totally devoid of shine.So the stars can see what both or all of us combined cannot:)
Thanks :)

[Gray]

Perhaps there are dead stars we can't see either in the shadow of good stars? lol You're welcome.

[fattycbreezy52]

Dead will be the ones who will be looking at us from the other side (star party) and probably giving themselves a sudden shake in the head thinking how stupid they had been to trust the bad ones :D

P.S : Bear with me because this conversation is going nowhere (or actually somewhere) :P

[Gray]

It's going into space in order to get to me, isn't it? :D

[fattycbreezy52]

Oh! So now you are an inhabitant of space also?:D
Haha

[Gray]

Haha, got ya. In order for me to talk to you, the signal has to go into space, doesn't it? lol :p

[fattycbreezy52]

Not really...I can very much hear you even while on earth:P
Anyway, that's so sweet of you;):P
You will make a good start, my friend ;)

[fattycbreezy52]

A good star*

[Reclaimed]

May be.... all one word 'maybe'..... or put an "it" in front of it. It may be....

Honestly, this doesn't work very well as a stand alone. You should flesh it out a bit. It's got a good start all ready to go.

[fattycbreezy52]

The best things are those which remain unsaid, my friend.
Thanks for your advice but I am good with whatever I have even if it's all about those mere possibilities (may be)

[fattycbreezy52]

And if it doesn't have to work, let it not work..I write honest and I write for myself .I never regret what I do. In fact, I try to make the most out of it:)
But thanks for the review:)

[Reclaimed]

You really should put an "it" in from of "may be". Your responses were very pretentious. Are you offended by my comment or just... you know.... vapid and pretentious? Like this.... "And if it doesn't have to work, let it not work.." What? That doesn't mean anything it just sounds cool. And this "I write honest and I write for myself .I never regret what I do." Why are you telling me that about a pretty innocuous and simple review? Eh.... I think you're full of s**t, vapid and pretentious. Didn't think that before but now that you've opened your mouth... yeah... you're kind of a d********g. Have a nice day jack a*s.

[fattycbreezy52]

You know what?
Thank you..This shows the s**t which writers like you have in their hearts...At least I write what I feel like unlike you who wants to gather only a bucket full of reviews..Have a good day!

[Re-Pete]

That's a beautiful thought. Very creative and deep. Thought provoking. Nice.