Just once

Just for once,
Open your eyes and see the truth.
Even closed eyes are capable
of seeing big castles
and coins of gold

Reviews

[Cassie]

This is short but very profound

[KWP]

People can only see when they are ready to understand - most will never reach that point in this lifetime because they don't even know it' there to see ...

[Coyote Poetry]

Logical wisdom in the poetry. Most people in the new generations. Survive with eyes closed. This is sad. We need to open our eyes and know the truth. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Traci]

Unfortunately some never see the truth. The real beauty is not what's seen but what's felt.
This is a beautiful, deep, write, and I cannot wait to read more from you.

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks a lot Traci...You are amazing:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

The brevity of this is what speaks to me the most.

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks a lot :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Some people refuse to see the truth even when it is doing a fan dance in front of them. Good one. Lydi**

[fattycbreezy52]

True...thank you :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

There is none so blind as those who would not see.

Beautiful poetry. Deep truth.

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks buddy...it's great to see you after a long time:)

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Such few lines carrying such a weighty message and that too in a beautiful manner. You are amazing as ever. More than ever actually. Keep the excellent work going! All the best! :)

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks love...You are my strength:)❤