Water girl

Oppositions come when fire and water meet

They never subside.

Immersed or not;

This aqua girl always cries.

Folks underestimate the tiny drops from the azure eyes

Thinking how can water cry?

This water of yours is no ordinary.

Step ahead and reveal it's subsistence.

The deep-seated fire in you

Can provide ample justifications

For how this love can never parish or diminish

Because it's just in the old books that they say,

"Water puts out fire".

Author's Note

Thanks for reading

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Opposites attract, no doubt about it. Some fires are not meant to be extinguished. Very romantic. Lydi*

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some fires burn too deep for water to quell...love the idea of water crying and your sentiment of opposites being attracted is well written...nicely-done, my friend...

[fattycbreezy52]

The first point made in your comment is bewitching. It's true to a great extent. Thanks for enriching my poems with your wonderful comments:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem and I agree. You could write a complete story with these words.
"Water puts out fire".
Water and fire create a dangerous path with a dead-end. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. You gave me reason to write with the strong verses.
Coyote

[fattycbreezy52]

Your comments have a greater depth attached to them. Thanks for formulating here for me, a stimulating environment,Coyote:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did write a poem with the title "Water and fire". Your poem gave me motivation to write today.