Swinging eternally

 

The yellow fringes

Of my saffron dress

Are feeling gutsy,

Fluttering in the ethereal air.

No hardship,

No grievance,

No responsibility,

No punishment,

No tomorrow,

 Today is eternal .

Every being in the seventh heaven.

The celestial swing moves by itself.

While down below,

Things are obscure,

In a state of flux.

O,

You vague being!

Come and hold,

The hem of my dress

 To swing perpetually.

Reviews

[marcus]

Today, is eternal! This moment, is everything!!

[fattycbreezy52]

True that!!!!!!

[Captain Rilen]

This poem makes me feel lively, thank you for sharing this lovely piece of writing

[fattycbreezy52]

I am glad..thanks for your thanks:)

[~]

What a gorgeous write. I love the playfulness of it, and the daring sassy last part! Who can resist this invitation? You better keep an eye on your hems girlie! :D

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes...I agree. .Let's go together. ..A late summer trip probably:D
You will be my amazing hem bodyguard. .So no worries:D♡

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Wow, FCB, love, love, love this... the colour and vibrancy of your words, accompanied by this stunning picture, leaves one feeling light and airy and wanting to cling to the hem of that dress... a promise to make things clearer for that 'vague being'... just beautiful, my friend

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes, she is so beautiful. I personally like this picture and very many thanks for a lovely review:)

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I agree... it's gorgeous...My pleasure, always, FCB!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Now this is fluid, descriptive and spunky write which sounds like gay abandon as she wishes to encourage her suitor on a balmy summer day.

[fattycbreezy52]

What a spunky review but I hope the suitor is equally a celestial body like her who can be a jovial company to her in heaven:D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed FCB, indeed!