Keep it simple,silly

The path to my heart is straight,

And simple.

Please ignore the thick valves.

To reach my pear,

All you need is to uproot,

A dense covering.

And carve your own passage out.

It's not a labyrinth,

I guarantee.

Author's Note

Thanks for spending your precious time.

Reviews

[marcus]

ha, deceptively simple...

[fattycbreezy52]

Thankies:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think in life we tend to over complicate things...it's habit...

when i teach English...my goal is to always keep it simple...writing is hard enough to learn....

and love is likewise...getting to someone's heart, we always hesitate, walk through mazes of feelings, overthink ....better to just take a straight line and go with the punches, as well as the heartbeats.

[fattycbreezy52]

True story.....!
Thanks Jacob:)

[Michael Wright]

I like that you used words not normally used to describe these feelings. Great work!

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes...indeed.Thanks a lot:)

[Misery]

The path to your poetic heart, even if it were surrounded by a labyrinth, would be a path worth taking and a trip worth making. Your poetic creations are always adored, dear Fatty.

[fattycbreezy52]

So very sweet of you..Thanks a lot dear poet:)

[Misery]

It is my pleasure to read your creations.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah....! Do I detect someone complex but not complicated in this? It contains a dichotomy for the simple path has thick valves and a dense covering in need of uprooting lol. Nicely expressed in this descriptive verse FCB

[fattycbreezy52]

That is again a clever interpretation.A tinge of complexity is necessary haha.Thanks for a lovely review,John:)

[....................]

no tangled, weaving pathways here...just a straight line...as long as you have patience to uncover it, you will find my heart... great piece and love the photo, FCB!

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes,that's an accurate way of describing the above piece.Tysm FT:)

[....................]

always my pleasure, my friend :)

[....................]

I wonder why so many have to make it complicated?

[fattycbreezy52]

That's what^^