And you got yourself a deal.

Bestfriends........Forever??????????///

You came like a manifold chocolate fountain,

Eliciting a great response from me

In a considerably small amount of time.

Fool I was!

     To be lured by your veils.

    Until you revealed to me

Your true face.

One by one,

  The wrappers unfolded,

  Your graceful fakeness,

Part by part,

    Being utterly prominent,

 Freed the caged being.

  You write abstract,

        You write without any base-

This was the truth you confessed to me

While you kept on tricking 

And playing with your readers' sentiments.

You called me a "best friend"

And an optimistic soul like me,

Got tempted upon seeing the ray of hope

And resuscitation.

No family,

No cousins,

No good pals,

And you got yourself a deal,

A true alliance,

A new mate(precisely,a pawn),

A fresh trust

To be broken soon,

And getting a chance

To play with those incautious,broken pieces

You never called,

You never texted,

You never wrote

And still called me a "bestie"

A bestie in name.

An elf,

Who was freed to go

Without even asking for it.

You never felt happy from inside

For whatever I had achieved,

Whereas the slightest of your achievements,

Least even to do with me,

Illuminated every aspect 

Of my troubled soul.

I was born good,inherently

I was hopeful enough to trust,again.

But,

I got up in the morning

To see how rapidly had that bad day

Finally come:)

Author's Note

This is a personal satire or lampoon.......................
OK..IT'S FOR MY EX-MATE........................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have never written such cliched poems before.But,reality comes with a pack of clitched emotions.Real incidents do not have any interesting elements.
Something which happened today with me is the very source of this poem.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i agree with Anto .. first line is killer .. great stuff .. this is also marvelous to me:
"You write abstract,
You write without any base-" ... so appropriate when readers are also writers .. i am glad you shared that this is about your x- mate ... confessionals and cliches can be risky ditties .. i don't think they detract from your intent ... sorry that your more recent experience brought the past front and center to renew your pain :((
love and peace fattycbreezy52 ... peace and joy!! ;)
E.

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes,but much happy with my present E by God's grace.Bitter episodes dominate but the occasions of gaiety also do not remain hidden from the hopeful eyes.Thanks a lot for your kind words:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I had to read again.
"Fool I was!
To be lured by your veils.
Until you revealed to me
Your true face.
One by one,
The wrappers unfolded,
Your graceful fakeness,
Part by part,"
Left things for the reader to think about. I could write a complete poem from you good words above. I liked the open ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha...your words are encouraging.Yes,open ending is a sign of modern poetry.Thanks a lot,Coyote:)

[Coyote Poetry]

It is and you are welcome.

[ANTO]

FcB, the opening line here is wonderful... a manifold chocolate fountain ...sublime imagery and very tempting.
Real friends live to an extent vicariously through their friends because their good times are and bad times, their disappointments and achievements affect the relationship as sure as stones dropped in a pond affect model boats.
Broken and damaged folks are easy pickings for some of these 'users' whose only aim is to feel better about themselves by stepping on others.
Life's truths have no hiding place from the FCB.

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha....again every word in this review reeks of life's bitterest truth. ...Thanks Anto!:)

[~]

What a pretty picture!! :D
And great rant sweetie! Keep your head up, stay on the side of good, never give in to the dark side ;)
People that will appreciate you for you, are lining up at your door :D

[fattycbreezy52]

True that,dearest. Thanks a lot!:)

[....................]

It seems this cloudy day is cloudy for a reason... your sentiments are apt for many of us these days, FCB... some people are selfish and so self-absorbed that they cannot see past themselves, oblivious to the pain and hurt they cause when dealing with those they consider to be best friends...when we give support and relish in the accomplishments of our friends and they never acknowledge us, the reality is often hard to swallow and we hang on until finally, that proverbial straw breaks, and we have to face-up to the real music... you write this with candour and passion; it's straight to the point; and you do so very well... chin up, my friend, for you are not alone...

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes...that's so very kind of you, FT:) Very many thanks! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow when someone lets you down you feel such mixed emotions. You have spread it across the page here. This is thick in the sticky residue of hurt, anger, incredulity, loss, bewilderment and sadness FCB. But you are better off without such people in your life.

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes and I have happily broken up even though this "happily broken"seems like an oxymoron. Yet, your last line is amazing enough to dissipate the contradictory effect of the above terms.Thanks John.