A spooky loss

He kept on yelling 'Carpe Diem',

At the top of his lungs.

But,you continued with your coyness,

Failing to yield

To an honest bevy of overtures.

Now defeated in the struggle against the monstrous time

Which gives your expiration a sardonic smile

Sleep here restlessly,

Devoid of beauty,

Rosy cheeks and hue,

Skittishness and coquettishness!

Surrender your biological structure

Entirely to the advances

Received from the creepy-crawlies

Down under.

Making upon your virginity

A bilious attack,

In the blood-curdling obscurity

Of a spooky grave.

While pale and cold

With a constant death-chill,

You would scream every night 

 For the redemption.

Author's Note

It's just my own way of expressing anger...The reason is definitely the beloved whom Marvell describes as totally coy and unyielding after reading "To his Coy mistress" for my exams.I don't know,I felt like writing about this stupid woman.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

While not familiar with the writing I find your work very good with a nice flow and imagery. Thank you.

[fattycbreezy52]

Means a lot.Thankyou:)

[sereenaoutloud]

You can feel your anger...no annoyance laced through this...!!
I feel you are a hopeless romantic breezy ..not understanding why she would have someone who loves her so and yet not surrender to it!!
Brilliant write as always... i love your writes!! :)

[Gee]

Get back to your bed!!!!!

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes,may be Sereena.I have lost hopes in romance.So,nowadays it has become a tendency to at least make such characters in poem or stories who can enjoy the most of it while it still lasts.It's difficult to analyse love for me.And thanks a lot for the review.I am glad you like my writes haha:)

[sereenaoutloud]

LMSO Hi Papa G .. its moving I'm up!! lol

[sereenaoutloud]

No breezy never give up hope on love girlie! :)

[Gee]

Good morning then my child,have some square sausage,tatty pancakes,black pudding,a couple of eggs....and then an immediate health check

[sereenaoutloud]

omg i wish... mmmm black pudding....drooling

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha you will educate me yet. I have just read 'To His Coy Mistress'. You capture that disdainful voice in this wrought iron piece as you chide her for foolishness. But be foolishness a choice rather than commanded by a voice such as his? Her virginity is hers to treasure until measure by measure she decides
to drop the filigree veil and impale herself upon the horns of man. Until that day she may hold back that tide, Canute like if you will. But the silver and the gold she does keep dry...........................................

[fattycbreezy52]

Wow.This interpretation can work,too.But there's no harm in surrendering to the person she loves.He Loves her.Hence,totally tolerant to her skittishness and uncertainty.He has not left her for any other beauty in spite of knowing that physical love is vital,too.If she continues with her coyness,think about him!One day eventually,the world will come to an end;D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha you made me post a piece called 'The Virgin'