Euphoria of downpour

The biggest advantage of crying in the rain

Is to get the bubbly touch of that lightweight drop

Which can make you relinquish the injurious prick of your tears,

And bask in this superb,magnetic euphoria.

A healing balm to your soul.Isn't it?

 

Reviews

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It is true, rain tends to wash away the tears literally and figuratively... raindrops are healing... beautiful image you have created here..

[fattycbreezy52]

Very many thanks, FT:)

[Misery]

I can feel a gentle rain softly cascading from your poem.
A well-crafted inspiration, dear Fatty.

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha.lovely review. Thankyou! :)

[Misery]

You are truly welcome.

[ANTO]

I expected to see - best thing about crying in the rain is no-one can see your tears for the rain on your face but you went down a totally different route here FcB. receiving universal effervescence from above can really change a frown to a smile. I experienced it once and never forgot it. You nailed it here my friend.
ps Thanks for sharing your story on 'H' on my poem page - it was a lovely thing. thank you.

[fattycbreezy52]

Woww. I couldn't write that first thing because it has become a widely appreciated quote. In that case, I couldn't have claimed my originality haha.But I m glad you liked this one Anto.Your reviews are always very encouraging. May this effervescence just never die.
And regarding 'H', I just had to share it and your poem was the best occasion for that. Because you know I would never write about myself. Infact, I would not even write a novel. I am too lazy to write :D

[ANTO]

thats what ghostwriters are for heh heh. :p

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As always FBC you capture a though, a moment and suspend it in aspic verse. This has shades of something we have all felt and that refreshing feel of washing away our tears does indeed calm the sadness. Not sure you need the 'Isn't it' at the end?

[fattycbreezy52]

Ohhh yes, such a great review. And isn't it I wrote to emphasise my question .May be. .Even I am not sure:D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You writing did that already and such a colloquial expression is simply tautology.