Her first step

Amidst those incense-bearing flowers,

And the joyful glee of mother nature,

Every first step taken by you,my child

Will lessen all my troubles.

Author's Note

A simple writeup on her first step.For all the lovely mothers out here:)
Picture :Andrei Belichenko

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

hey!! what about Dad's !!! ;)

you remind me of the first steps of all my children .. the process from scooting backwards to crawl to stand ... and the encouraging hands held out ... all precious memories .. so thank you for that .. my children are all in the 20-30 range so i have been caught up in parental worries about decisions i have no control over any more :) but the hands are still outstretched and the encouragement always available .. one of the things i especially like about your poem is the ongoing life expressed in your third line "Every first step ..." not just the first physical step .. nice one! very much enjoy where your poem takes me
E.

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha i think my author's note has got a mistake.Dads equally play an important role,haha.
And such an amazing review.PLus,i liked the way you saw the continuation and connection--the ongoing process.Parents like you would really understand and appreciate the emotions behind these four lines.I am really glad, sir:)Thanks for an amazing review,once again:)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...........

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and positive words and places you took the reader. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[fattycbreezy52]

Much thanks:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

and she is very pretty,and her first step captured in a photo,something to cherish

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks a lot:)

[Robert]

I like this piece simple but pure.

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks a lot:)

[PawanPreet Rai]

Nyco.....................

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Simply a beautiful piece full of love and truth FCB. You display the selflessness and dedication of the one who bore the birth and suckled the infant and who will shepherd it to adulthood and beyond.

[fattycbreezy52]

Wow..I am glad I could do that. Thanks a lot for the lovely review, John:)

[ANTO]

Im sorry but E's comments and your response cracked me up. You guys should collab on a funny. xDD

This is so tranquil and wise my friend. A wonderful sentiment that makes one think just how many such milestones go to make a childs journey to adulthood.
A super write FcB. :)))

[fattycbreezy52]

Dearest Anto--what was so funny in my response? :D
And thank you. The child in the picture is definitely you, only if you were a cute little girl; )
So cute haha! And thanks a lot for the lovely review:)

[ANTO]

E said: "hey!! what about Dad's !!! ;)"
You said: " ...i think my author's note has got a mistake..." - totally cool and at the same, witty.

i could have been a girl. It was a 50/50 chance. lol
your very welcome - :))

[fattycbreezy52]

Lmao xD.....haha you and your ways;) Cool

[ANTO]

Once upon a time there was
Irish ways and Irish Laws... - sorry FcB - got carried away the.er

[fattycbreezy52]

Lol lol lol